MY SILLY SONG
I had to do a poem for English class so I made it into a song. I didn't know i liked making poems until I had to do them, it's actually fun
~I AM ABLE I AM WILLING~
I am able I am willing.
I wonder how to stop the killing.
I hear the parents crying.
I see their children dying
I want the bullets to cease from killing.
I am able I am willing.
I wonder how to stop the killing.
I hear the parents crying.
I see their children dying
I want the bullets to cease from killing.
I am able I am willing.
I pretend not to see the bloody stains.
I feel the silence once it drains.
I touch hope to stop the dealing of dope.
I worry about the people who say there’s no hope.
I cry that these people will stop the killing.
I am able I am willing.
I feel the silence once it drains.
I touch hope to stop the dealing of dope.
I worry about the people who say there’s no hope.
I cry that these people will stop the killing.
I am able I am willing.
I understand the people trying.
I say please stop your crying.
I dream one day that it will cease.
I try to make a bit of peace.
I hope now that you will stop your killing…
I am able I am willing.
I say please stop your crying.
I dream one day that it will cease.
I try to make a bit of peace.
I hope now that you will stop your killing…
I am able I am willing.
James Zegers
posted by James Zegers @ 9:54 PM
57 comments
57 Comments:
WOW MAN! How come you never told me you could write poems?
That is like so good man! Keep it up! :-P (Was that actually done by you? :-)
It's not silly btw, that is like wayyy better than anything I could ever do!
ya man that is good u never told me u wrote that poem
it is good though
clapping!!!!!!!!!
that is good!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up:)
Wow, that is very good...I think you're the only guy I know who can write poems :-)
thanx guys your're all great, it took me about ten minutes to do that. It's easy you just have to think of stuff that rymes!
lol!
yeah you are the only guy I know that can write poems!
well unless all you other guys can and I just have never seen them...
I think I've only written one poem in my whole life, and it's not really worthy to be called a poem :-)
lol whatever...mine aren't worthy of being called 'poems' either.
:-P
Belive me, yours are good...way better than mine was.
Okay, I will belive you. :-D lol
Well I didn't read yours so I can't agree or disagree with you. :-) Maybe you should post it. :-)
ya andrew you should post it man
ya andrew post it lol
we all want to see it lol
Hey btw, you are bad James! You weren't supposed to REVAMP MY LINK!
:-P
Yeah Andrew...you really should post it. :-)
lol post it where??
I dunno...like wherever...
Okay, wherever..how specific :-)
Belive me, it's only like 7 lines long, and it's one of those free-verse or whatever you call them...it doesn't rhyme. It's really not worth posting :-)
lol I told you I do belive you ;-P
Okay,...just post it on here!
Or there's the option of getting a blog and posting it there too eh?
:-)
Fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnne, here you guys go :-)
THE FISHING POND
A stick in my hand
I bait my hook
Lower the line
Waiting
Hoping
Then suddenly
A tug
A snap
A splash
And I am left
All alone
With a stick
In my hand.
See, I told you it wasn't worth posting :-P
lol you're funny :-P
It was too worth posting! It's }<()()|_, at least I think so.
Oh, and keep it up Andrew!
:-)
lol, very good andrew!!!
i agree, it was worth posting:)
That is awesome Andrew!!!!!!!
and yours is really good too James, aren't you glad it's not up to us eh? wow... that would jsut be plain scary. no wonder people commit suicide.
Those are both awesome poems.
wow andrew what an amazing poem lol
i don't think i could do on ethat good lol
wow Andrew good poem, when did you write that?
and Melissa I'm sorry I added your link to my blog I didn't know that I wasn't allowed to.
oh and thanx Heidi, changing the world isn't up to use to do but we can help!!
It's okay man.
Yeah when I sent out my new add. again I asked those who had me linked not to revamp it for a while, but oh well.
I'll probably change it again anyways...
Umm, I wrote it a few years ago james.
Awesome poem James!! You and Melissa should get together and write some music for your poems!! And then release a CD!! Now I'll be expecting at least one poem a month, especially if it only takes ten minutes to do it!
And Andrew....wow that was so profound!! It took my breath away!! You are so good!!!!!!!! I bet if you published them you would become famous.
thanx Marie, I'll try to keep up with ur high demand.
AND WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!1
Say whaaaa?
us...a cd?
That's absurd!
I can't even write lyrics, let alone make up a tune that goes with it!
lol
hey a song can't be that hard...at least i don't think so. all you have to do is write a nice poem and write music for it. that's basically all a song is. you guys should really go for it!!
i'll make your labels and cd covers and such things. we could get a buisness going!
You should post about this weekend James. :-P
I wish I coulda gone :-P
And sure Marie, I guess I'll take you up on the offer. :)
However...the cd will only be sold in countries across the ocean. :-)
right... but of course you'll give the rest of us autographed copies right??
:-)
Ummm sorry to disappiont you, but if I have any say... :-) I'll give you my autograph though! lol
You first have to give us a copy of yours okay? :-) We'll come to some sort of an agreement. As for the rest of you...well I'm not sure that any of you would want to hear it. :)
I don't know. it really would be cool to make up a song. We have to get together sometime James and Amanda. And Heidi...we still have to figure out when we're gonna do that eh??
Eh can't wait to hear it with music!
Oh & Andrew those kind of poems are so cool!
I love writing them... they're pretty weird.
sorry that sounds weird my brain's a little fuzzy
new post! :-)
I wonder who that was :P
yeah me too :P
Okay, so if you're wondering who you are, then think we're all in trouble :-)
Do you know who this is, just out of curiosity?
I know eh?
And yes, I do know who you are. :-)
It was you Andrew, right?
yep :-)
how did I guess...;-P
melissa, what weekend do you mean? the cottage weekend?
oh June 11 likely works for me to get together if you guys want to!!!!!!!
June 11...okay I think that works for me. We'll have to talk to Heidi and Liz though...
And yes, I did mean the cottage weekend. You should post some pictures.
Oh, and if Amanda doesn't e-mail the picts of albs car to me, wouldjah mind to? I really want to post them...
J-a-m-e-s where are you man?
We should play paintball soon...
ok I'm back
I'll try to post the weekend at the cottage.
And I'll tell Amanda to send ya those pics.
oh and Jeff sais that June 11 doesn't work for him now because Yvonne is coming to my house now GRRRRRRRRRR!
Well...I think that my niece is gonna be baptized on the 11th so that probly wouldn't work out anyways.
Btw, I called her 'my niece' 'cause I don't even know right off how to spell her name. It's kinda weird...
Post on the cottage!!
DId I tell you that my hair bleached from the shvaing cream?? It takes a few days for it to work!! Now I have highlights!!
Awesome! Maybe I should do that to mine... ;-P
Meh...too bad we didn't use Ben's coloured hairspray man, that would have been fun!!!
Yo, I finally bought new wires for the guitar. ;-P
It's fixed now, but way outa tune. And I'm not tuning it this time. :-D
WoW love it
Marie, I'm soooooooooo sorry. I hope your not mad at me. Besides I bet you look good with a few Highlights LOL
Oh, she looks totally splendiferous.
Very best site. Keep working. Will return in the near future.
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